Help Name the Opal Story

I’m working on the Opal sequel, and I want your help. Here’s a synopsis (though I’m not through) of what happens in the story. Although middle-aged Opal Pratt has lived on that property all her life and her parents were there for some years before that, Opal has now learned that the front part of the property does not belong to her. And she’s not happy. She watches the land being cleared, a house larger and nicer than hers going up, and driveways being paved.
What shall we name the story? The working title is Land Lost, but that’s no good for a real title. Neighbors came to mind, but that’s too friendly. Changes might be a decent title. What do you think we should call it? Leave me a comment with your ideas.


1 thought on “Help Name the Opal Story

  1. LAND GRAB ( it’s not her land because it was secretly appropriated thru a swindle in 1868 against an elder relative who thought they owned it but another had taken it from a native american tribe…choctaws?)
    PAVED IN GOLD ( traces of gold discovered in the soil and don’t want opal to benefit. paperwork indicates land belongs to native american tribal council due to theft early in last century. opal would have had no reason to suspect it was not hers. she had found a nugget or two over the years but thought nothing of it.)

    WHAT FUN TO SHARE…i’m sure you’ll receive billions of better ones…enjoy blessings a.


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